Me very like this work, therefore I am to permit myself some change in you work
Color, form on face and hand, position hand. Maybe is not enough, but you may do this better!
Just see on animation - what I what talk to you.
And maybe change bg? Something like this:
Maybe this color is not what you want, but I mean - if light is warm, the shadow is cold and the reverse this.
If you want you may use this edit as you wish.
I want see the final.
