Begin in demoscene... FINISH UPDATE

[Crazy Asian Gamer]

T is nice, but may draw too much attention to it (I'll assume that it's "Matriax" that is to be the focus).
If you do decide to keep it, remove the tree, and move the cloud and lightning over the T so at least the T would have reason in being lighted up the way it is. (Would also help a bit in the uncluttering.
It'd be cool if the "T" half-illuminated the letters beside it, and those letters half-illuminated these adjacent letters, and etc.
The moon is tres sexy, as always. Love those colors. Keep goin.

[Ryumaru]

even with all the elements in there, the only one i have a major problem with is the lightning, you took it too far there.

[Helm]

What I think you should do, Matriax, is just finish this without upadating your thread every time you touch the art. Maybe some people like the constant progress updates, but I don't think you're benefitting from asking us every little bit 'is this good? should I keep it?' This isn't much about pixel art critique anymore, you've got your skills and apply them well, so depend on your artistic vision and finish this on your own. Style critique can be a dangerous thing, listen to too many people and you end up with watered-down pieces of nothing with no idiosyncratic value mostly.

[Matriax]

Oks, thanks for the comments helm i agree you  and sorry for my constant "little updates",etc...

I think tomorrow or sunday i finish the the logo. Well, i no update more with "litle updates" when i think the logo is "finished" i put here for critiques 

I make much questions by this is my best pixel-art(i think), and i view my progress and i no want ruin the scene, and i agree with the comments that the image its coming a little saturated.(i finally remove the bubles XD... ) But well also its depends of the style of the pixel-artist.

When i finish the logo i will create an animation with all the progress and a little video-tutorial recording me making the logo, i think for any people can be interesting.

[DrDerekDoctors]

Hmm, tbh I think that the illuminated T is a little much. I like the lighting in the water, but it's getting so busy that soon suggestions such as "there should be a robot in one corner firing a laser out of it's crotch into the eyes of a child in the other corner" won't be out of place at all.

[Crazy Asian Gamer]

it's getting so busy that soon suggestions such as "there should be a robot in one corner firing a laser out of it's crotch into the eyes of a child in the other corner" won't be out of place at all.

Of course, if that's part of Matriax's artistic vision, I'll wholly accept that...

...mainly because that'd be TOTALLY SWEET.

[Blick]

I agree that the additions have jumped the shark.

Although Dr's suggestion just might make a wonderful piece on its own...

[Matriax]

Well this is the finish update.

The piece need a little changes, but when i finish totally the image i will uploaded to my web



And thanks all the people about the comments, suggestions etc...

[Rox]

I like it. There's a balance to keep when deciding whether to keep the viewer's focus on one thing, or put so many things in it becomes busy. Too busy, and you can't stand to look at it. But I like this. It's interesting enough to be quickly glanced at and enjoyed as a whole, but interesting enough to handle both one and two closer looks at all the details.

[Filax_666]

Yeah...it's lovely.