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Triple
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Attempt on a Rat
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September 10, 2007, 09:56:40 am
Well tell me what I can improve
Cause it doesnt really look that good.
The first two frames are for walking, the third is for attack.
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Re: Attempt on a Rat
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September 10, 2007, 02:49:54 pm
Rats should be grey, and the feet are very yellow.
you could also try to give it ears.
edit: you're right about the claws and teeth, but i still think that it would look better grey.
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Re: Attempt on a Rat
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September 10, 2007, 03:05:54 pm
The rat has eres, and the yellow thing is claws xD
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Re: Attempt on a Rat
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September 10, 2007, 03:11:58 pm
Rats aren't just grey. The saturated yellow does stand out amongst the desaturated browns. I'd up the contrast, and maybe work on the perspective. As of now, we've got a top down of his body, but he seems to be looking more or less directly at us.
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