Attempt on a Rat

[Triple]

Well tell me what I can improve    Cause it doesnt really look that good.

The first two frames are for walking, the third is for attack.

[telecommtubbie]

Rats should be grey, and the feet are very yellow.
you could also try to give it ears.

edit: you're right about the claws and teeth, but i still think that it would look better grey.

[Triple]

The rat has eres, and the yellow thing is claws xD

[Cure]

Rats aren't just grey.  The saturated yellow does stand out amongst the desaturated browns.  I'd up the contrast, and maybe work on the perspective.  As of now, we've got a top down of his body, but he seems to be looking more or less directly at us.