If that animation is going to run smooth it'll need a couple more frames.. Its nice but choppy. Is the first screen a nondamaged version? If not, probably want to add one and delay a little more than the other frames. Looks pretty cool overall though, what exactly is it? Looks like a wierd beholder or something to me o.o

Fetus

Thanks alot cam, I know damn well that sprite is assage maximus.. I just couldnt really put my finger on what or what all was wrong with it. The vertical wing 'fins' that intersect the wings I just dont know how to get to appear from a top view. Obviously you wont see them but they should be noticably popping out, right? I tried to show them with darkened shadows to the right but alas, that's only part of it. I'll get right on fixing this up. Also.. I had a model like that once but it got lost when I moved years ago.. So Ill have to do some searchin for a top view. As for the slight V shape.. I don't remember there being one on the model or in the anime/manga, Ill have to go look for that when I search for a top perspective. I can't see it in that picture..

EDIT: Found a decent picture of straight wingspan on swordfish.


EDIT #2:
Colors redone. Tried to define the wing fins a bit more.. Back lift fin looks better.. (Fin over thruster) It still needs work but I'll have to get on it tomorrow.

Thanks again

Fetus

Took all CnC into consideration and came out with this. The only bit I haven't gotten to was the one about it's small size.. I think its a great idea to make a larger version, but I wanted to finish my tiny sprite one first. I'm interested to see how much more detail I can fit into a larger piece.

Fetus

Looks pretty kickass shivs, only comment I have is that his hand giving the godsend is.. somehow off. The shape looks more like a dinner biscuit than a hand, even compared to his other hand.. Other than that nice job, as usual. Leet muscle shades that I can't do yet 

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