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Offline Sohashu

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Spiral Wank

on: October 19, 2009, 07:03:30 pm
Hey guys I made a thing because I was bored.  I tried doing something different and new (to me) and I was just wanting some more hardcore analysis/critique.



Also I made a 3x3 font as many have done before, but I like it.
« Last Edit: October 19, 2009, 07:37:05 pm by ptoing »
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Re: Spiral Wank

Reply #1 on: October 21, 2009, 01:41:33 pm
Pixelling aside I see a major problem with composition. 50% of your piece is blank space and the other half is made up of tiny condensed details. There's no reason for microscopic characters and pinprick text when you have that much empty space to work with. Even if this is a fake for a game (which I'm not sure if it is?) composition and proportion should be the first issue that gets addressed.
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Re: Spiral Wank

Reply #2 on: October 21, 2009, 02:42:46 pm


To be perfectly honest there wasn't any compositional intention in this.   Its more just having fun and trying to get around a creative block.

3x3 text was a personal challenge that I'm yet to conquer.  Z and G elude me, and m and w are cheating.



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