[WIP]ffta2 characters

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and possibly the rest of the main ffta2 cast if i'm not entirely bored with the style when i finish this



crit the hell out of it, i need the advice after nearly a month of not doing anything art related

[EvilEye]

As these final fantasy games progress, the swords wielded by the main character get more and more ridiculous Or maybe that's a can opener?

I think the upper arm on the left is bent slightly. Its coming out of the shoulder straight and then starts going up.

The front part of the foot on the right looks stubby. Should probably be a little wider.

Other then that it looks good.

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tried fixing what you mentioned, almost finished the body

[Memo]

pretty so far, how many colors are you using for this?

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if the design wasn't so fucking retarded i probably could have used less colors, but it's at 28
and i hate luso in general so i'm not gonna work on this anymore, submitted it to pj

and i'll start hurdy tomorrow

edit: man i did an awful job with that sword

[alkaline]

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i feel like the colors are too darkened and saturated. maybe that's just me, i dunno.

[Tobe]

i feel like the colors are too darkened and saturated. maybe that's just me, i dunno.

yea, I agree... and if you're not going under any color restraint, I suggest you have colored lines for the lines "inside". Reason for saying so is because it still looks kinda dark to me.

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bailed out on this thread because i wanted to finish a few more before i tried getting some crits on it. one more character to sprite after penelo and i'll be done

and i never really got around to reading alkaline's comment until now, but i think that may just be a problem with luso, because tbh he's the only one that seems overly dark to me right now. regardless i'll either do the colored inside lines to them all, or just mess with his palette a bit

edit: uploaded an old version on accident

heh

[alkaline]

mm yeah I have no crits for the other ones, the colors work fine pretty much. nice work, great detail!

[hsn2555]

amazing work man, i quiet like your characters