Made a little edit as to how I would change it.
The red does not work to aa black and dark grey, it's too saturated and burns. That red and dark gray is a very risky combination in general.
As far as imitation of my style goes, Ilkke is right, I tend to go either geometric, all out round or a mix between, but i always try to keep it clean and sharp looking.
The face in yours has several areas which do not read too well mouth/chin area, and others where you have odd changes from light to dark in dither, like in the sides of the neck.
The nose is also a bit too thin looking i think, and the highlight makes it look razor sharp.
And finally I would aa more



Also I encourage everyone who will is trying to imitate to make edits of his stuff, in case they are posting here on pix anyway. This would deffo be the best help in this case.
« Last Edit: January 21, 2008, 03:52:22 am by ptoing »

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There are no ugly colours, only ugly combinations of colours.