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[Terley]

I've got some small suggestions with this, though it's improved alot you could work a bit more on it's readability in my opinion. It's a harsh palette restriction but it doesn't mean you can't still trick the eye here and there.



I don't think the neck should cone out like that, Changed it slightly, hinted in the shape of the neck too.

Though the face shape should be pretty much symetrical, the lighting will hit her face at an angle so theres nothing wrong with some variation.

I think the nose needs more definition too.

I've changed some AAing here and there too, hope any of this helps.

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I don't think I've ever looked like that in my life.  

But that's okay. Your edit was pretty useful. I took some of your advice.



Dude-- I really should save things before uplodading them. D;

[ndchristie]

I don't think I've ever looked like that in my life.   

in all fairness, we don't know what you look like if you post no reference ^^

the pat of tocky's terley's edit that i liked was the way he handled that one strand of hair across the forehead.

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Well... touché.  XD



I don't have a camera. XD I'm using, basically no reference-- I'm still running to and fro from the bathroom, mind you. X3

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Nitpicks. Anything to say before I move on and dub this finished?

Edit: Because I was falling over with boredom--

I didn't want to start something new yet, since I don't know whether this is really finished, but I wanted to do something...

Silly alien-eque edit: