[WIP]Rpg character[WIP] More Updates.

[I Am Uh]

Thanks, I guess. But I'm not sure... How do you guys feel about sel-out?

[Faktablad]

Since everybody's doing it, I decided to make an edit, to see if I could make him more manly.   


--Removed the shadow in between the breasteses (MANBOOBS ERADICATED!)
--Beefed up the abs, adding more of the light grey to make them pop out, and making them (somewhat) anatomically correct
--Raised and squared the shoulders

I then worked on the pants.
--Changed the highlight and shadow colors to be sure that the pants aren't mistaken for skin
--Made the waistline of the pants curve to the body, instead of being a straight line.  This also reinforces the perspective
--Took some of the beef from the outside of the legs and added it to the inside of the legs, making the character more dynamic and less awkward, I think.

I sincerely hope this helps.

[I Am Uh]

Thanks, that actually help a lot. Here's an update.

[I Am Uh]

Bumpdate.
Whipped together a bogus standing animation.

What do you think?

[PASSOUT]

His head should move up and his chest should move with the body motion.

[I Am Uh]

Head movement looks really choppy. when the sches goes down at the same rate the body does it looks bad also.

[LoTekK]

Head movement looks really choppy. when the sches goes down at the same rate the body does it looks bad also.

...
Did you just crit your own work without realising?

[Ian]

Already showed this to you on Pixel:

Maybe someone here could get head movement to work like I wanted to try or improve/comment on it in some other way.

[I Am Uh]

it looks better than mine but, it still looks choppy and messy. I don't really think head movement is necessary.

Edit: Update, fixed a couple things here.

Eyes are lower to give it more of an r.p.g'ish touch.
The breathing looks smoother now.
Head still isn't working.

[PASSOUT]

Head movement looks really choppy. when the sches goes down at the same rate the body does it looks bad also.

...
Did you just crit your own work without realising?

HA!

Yes I think that if the head moved it would seem more "real"