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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #10 on: June 27, 2007, 05:21:32 am
Extended the arm length, moved the ears down and now he has eye color.

If the legs were any longer they'd look weird, I tried.

I'd say this is just about gone, unless he needs like hair or something its already 16 colors inc trans. Any other crits?
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #11 on: June 27, 2007, 02:24:56 pm
Oh, that looks loads better.  Nice improvement!  The torso looks good, bht shoes have form, and he doesn't look lik he's going to fall over!  Of course, I still have a couple nitpicks, but they're real small things now.
-The eye color is rather wasted; I have to zoom to 4x to see the one pixel of blue.  I'd recommend sticking with the black there.
-The black and brown pixels still don't look like ears.  I don't know what you're trying to do there,but it's not really working.  I think that if you were to add hair, ears would be unnecessary, since they would only be one pixel wide at this scale.

You've come a long way from the original; nice work!
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #12 on: June 27, 2007, 06:32:43 pm
Thanks. Uhh... Ya, i'll update in a little while.
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #13 on: June 27, 2007, 07:15:50 pm
If the legs were any longer they'd look weird, I tried.
The problem isn't so much with the length of the legs as it is with the length of the torso. Try shortening the torso so that the waist is level with the elbows.

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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #14 on: June 27, 2007, 07:44:29 pm
I don't know what you guys are talking about.... My elbows are in the middle or my torso. Anything else besides what it is now looks deformed, or too short and stubby like. If you're so concerned, maybe you could show me an edit.
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #15 on: June 27, 2007, 08:10:49 pm
"If you're so concerned, maybe you could show me an edit."

If you're so concerned, maybe you could show me an edit of the sprite.You said you tried making him taller but never posted the sprite for us to look at.Which could help fix the problem your having.Your not going to get better having other people do the work for you.
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #16 on: June 27, 2007, 08:29:55 pm
I don't know what you guys are talking about.... My elbows are in the middle or my torso. Anything else besides what it is now looks deformed, or too short and stubby like. If you're so concerned, maybe you could show me an edit.
Try making just the head a bit smaller.

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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #17 on: June 27, 2007, 08:41:17 pm
God, damn. Here if it makes you happy this is what it looks like.

Now he looks like a short woman with long arms.
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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #18 on: June 27, 2007, 08:51:29 pm
No he doesn't, but his trousers are too close in colour to his skin, and the inner outlining of his chest gives the impression of breasts.
Also, you should try to be more appreciative. People are only trying to help.

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Re: [WIP]Rpg character UPDATE [WIP]

Reply #19 on: June 27, 2007, 08:53:09 pm
Nice attitude, buddy. As far as I'm concerned, nobody's under any obligation to edit other people's work; people do so out of generosity if they can afford the time and energy. Also, you asked for critiques, did you not? Feel free to ignore them, but getting all pissy just seems rude.

Against my better judgment, I did a quick edit to show you what I meant.



Though to be honest, there's more I would fix up besides just the leg/torso lengths, such as the manboobs, and possibly the shape of the head (it's awfully circular at the moment).
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