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[Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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Noouhh
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[Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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October 07, 2019, 07:52:09 pm
Hi!
I recently have been working on some attack animations, and would really appreciate some feedback on this one:
Thank you!
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Curly
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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October 07, 2019, 07:57:59 pm
I'd remove a couple of frames from the swing. It feels heavy and slow.
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Noouhh
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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October 07, 2019, 08:15:35 pm
How about this?
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Curly
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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October 07, 2019, 10:21:02 pm
Yeah it feels better now.
His left foot stands out a bit to me. Having two positions instead of turning it every frame might look better... I think? But I'm just nitpicking now.
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MysteryMeat
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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October 08, 2019, 12:49:34 am
feet should remain planted on the same spot for a good swing
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Mistajaye
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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November 16, 2019, 05:36:42 am
I agree with MysteryMeatz on the feet. Here's what I would do. I added a blinking animation and hair swaying downward to give it more jazz, also I tweaked the slashing and added Meatz input with the feet. Looking good my Man. Interesting piece I must say and I cannot wait to see the final product.
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MysteryMeat
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Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
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November 17, 2019, 02:32:12 am
some good tweaks on the last post, but planted doesn't mean 100% static! For a swing like that his far leg would likely pivot slightly to allow for the movement. Play with the knees, that's where most of the movement will be!
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