GR#208 - Octopus Girl - Anatomy

[SteamCaptain]

Awesome, that on a hole 'nother level.
You gave it much more life. The pose gives it personality and it tells a bit of story.

Great progress, cheers mate!

[lachrymose]

Moving along.

[kriss]

Good job lachrymose !
I prefer the first model style (more details, could be use in a mature game), but you did a great move by changing the whole position: it's more interesting this way.
I suggest you keep red bra so you add an extra colour : i have the feeling the character share only 1 strong color (brown).
I prefer the previous contrasted colours (personnal thought because cartoons's style isn't my favorite style ^^ )

[9_6]

You're overcomplicating it, getting lost in the detail.



Those spots aren't everywhere, they are mainly just on the head so you don't need to put them on the tentacles and you should consider that if something goes on a tentacle, it'll also go on the arms and legs.
The bright goes down to the tentacles so why not make the face that color and keep it consistent until it reaches a limb?
Drop that spraycan and never pick it up again. There is no use for it pretty much ever.
Try picking up a bigger brush instead and block things out and recycle colors.
Don't use new ones for every new object or the picture will not look unified at all and be hard to edit.

[lachrymose]

Your edits are pretty awesome. I'll keep those tips in mind. 

And thanks Kriss!

At it again without using line work like previous works.
Changed again the pose and the style, going more for an american comic book style with the implied lines and such.
[Edit] Breast reduction. 

[Edit] Thoughts on arm and muscles.

[Edit] Trying something new with quick and dirty hair.

I think i'm done for now. -_-
Oh as a comparison. My first sprite I ever posted here:


Thanks guys!