AuthorTopic: Captain America...and DP, I guess **Updated 07/21/06**  (Read 21645 times)

Offline Tremulant

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More work/boredom induced pixelling. No background again... if there were, he'd be leaning against.. something.

Old:
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/deadpool.PNG
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/cappy.PNG
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/cappy2.PNG
http://h1.ripway.com/tremulant/cappy3.PNG

New Stuff:
<---Ugly?
<--Previous... <--New!
A much modified Cap.

Tell me about it.

EDIT:
Contrast/...stuff might be iffy 'cause of the monitors.

EDIT2:
*New version... much smaller, but any better? (contrast note still applicable)
*Added Cap. Might become another pixel dump, la diarrhea.
« Last Edit: July 21, 2006, 06:22:07 pm by Tremulant »

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #1 on: July 14, 2006, 06:51:50 pm
Another great work :), colors and AA very well.

No much critcs, only the right arm seem a litle thick. And think need detail the feet.

And the form mmm i think is not correct, seems go to fall... I think the leg need more straigh.

overall great work.

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #2 on: July 14, 2006, 07:51:37 pm
another great marvel pixel =>
the only thing that bothers me is the bottom of the head.  It seems like it gets cut off prematurely.

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #3 on: July 14, 2006, 08:19:51 pm
Aaaaah I loved this guy when I was in middle school...he got me into my nearly decade-long Joe Madureira idolatry phase :D  The coloring is great, but I think the pose is really out of character, deadpool seemed to be mainly a mercenary version of Spiderman with some skin problems, he seems very...relaxed here.  Because of the costume colors, the arms are pretty hard to read at first glance at 1x (I suspect they had a problem in the comics with this too, thus all the crazy spiderman poses).  I think his eyes are slightly too low (or else he is looking downward, in which case the eyes should be thinner).  His right ankle reads funny and looks almost feminine.  His left (our right hand) is very confusing to me.  love his traps though!

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #4 on: July 14, 2006, 08:23:18 pm
He looks like he'd be running, not leaning. I'm not familiar with the character, but I second everything Adam said.

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #5 on: July 15, 2006, 01:38:44 am
hand which holds the longsword is completely unreadable. where is the thumb, where are the fingers, plus it's pretty much impossible to hold a sword at that angle towards your body. Reconfigure.

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #6 on: July 15, 2006, 02:08:01 am
I don't think the pose is working at all. Deadpool is basically standing upright (http://web.njit.edu/~dac8/images/DeadPool.bmp) or doing basically impossible movements (http://ultimatecomics.free.fr/xmen/images/x-men/Deadpool_Cover_069.jpg). Also his head and that hand Helm mentions are really messed up.

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Re: Deadpool

Reply #7 on: July 15, 2006, 03:01:41 am
i dont see it
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Re: Deadpool

Reply #8 on: July 15, 2006, 11:15:10 pm
there's just too many anatomical errors here, i suggest you scrap this and look at some ref's
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Re: Deadpool

Reply #9 on: July 17, 2006, 02:32:21 am
there's just too many anatomical errors here, i suggest you scrap this and look at some ref's

Agreed. Dunno why I posted, aside from the fact that I was bored and I haven't been able to do much lately art wise. I may still do a deadpool pic, but this one's ready for the junk heap. ;D

Thanks for all the replies, though guys. Sorry for the poor effort. I'll (probably) do better next time. ;)