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Offline WM

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Crouching football player

on: April 16, 2011, 01:16:04 am
Hey, I jsut don't really know where to go with this. The pose seems a little off, the colors are a little wonky, and it really doesn't read right and I'm having trouble simplifying the pixel clusters.

Any advice?

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Re: Crouching football player

Reply #1 on: April 16, 2011, 09:14:31 pm
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Re: Crouching football player

Reply #2 on: April 20, 2011, 12:18:21 am
There seems to be too many jumbled colors that don't need to be there. Try using more solid colors, clean up the outline, then see how it reads. I think the legs could be a bit beefier, they seem too small for the guy. The updated version looks way better.