Pixelation

Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: WM on April 16, 2011, 01:16:04 am

Title: Crouching football player
Post by: WM on April 16, 2011, 01:16:04 am

Hey, I jsut don't really know where to go with this. The pose seems a little off, the colors are a little wonky, and it really doesn't read right and I'm having trouble simplifying the pixel clusters.

Any advice?
(http://wmsprites.webs.com/football%20player%2001%20colored.png)

Title: Re: Crouching football player
Post by: WM on April 16, 2011, 09:14:31 pm

Updated version:

(http://wmsprites.webs.com/football%20player%2001%20colored%20bb.png)

Title: Re: Crouching football player
Post by: ColonelMustache on April 20, 2011, 12:18:21 am

There seems to be too many jumbled colors that don't need to be there. Try using more solid colors, clean up the outline, then see how it reads. I think the legs could be a bit beefier, they seem too small for the guy. The updated version looks way better.