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Offline mozzy

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Game Title Screen Art

on: December 29, 2010, 09:09:46 pm
This is the design I have for the backround image of title screen for a game. I feel that the anatomy is way off, I want to get that down before I begin any pixel work/more detail. I forgot to draw her right hand, which she uses to smell a flower.
Old:
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-1.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-2.png

New:

It is based on this poster by a French artist who's name escapes me at the moment  :P

« Last Edit: December 31, 2010, 07:13:19 am by mozzy »
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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #1 on: December 29, 2010, 10:34:35 pm
According to my vast knowledge of French artists, I can safely say that the poster is by Paul Berthon.
... Okay fine it was in the corner of the image.   :-[

Your piece is excellent so far, everything is perfect. The only problem I have is with the hand. Perhaps allow more space at the bottom to show the full hand? At the moment it is a bit awkward looking at it.

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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #2 on: December 30, 2010, 12:33:54 am
Improvement?
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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #3 on: December 30, 2010, 12:47:36 am
Thats a little better yes. The hair is pretty damn fluffy.

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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #4 on: December 30, 2010, 01:04:25 am
Face edit:



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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #5 on: December 30, 2010, 01:22:52 am
Thanks!



I don't want her to be too pretty. Just a bit above normal is perfect.
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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #6 on: December 30, 2010, 03:50:59 pm
Major update, shading is yucky:
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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #7 on: December 31, 2010, 04:04:04 am
Her face is too flat. Compare against your ref.

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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #8 on: December 31, 2010, 07:14:04 am
What else do you reccomend doing because I'm not seeing much of a difference in the shading.

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Re: Game Title Screen Art

Reply #9 on: December 31, 2010, 09:37:19 am
I like the color palette, other than that it's not really my type of girl :)
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