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Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: mozzy on December 29, 2010, 09:09:46 pm

Title: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: mozzy on December 29, 2010, 09:09:46 pm

This is the design I have for the backround image of title screen for a game. I feel that the anatomy is way off, I want to get that down before I begin any pixel work/more detail. I forgot to draw her right hand, which she uses to smell a flower.
Old:
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-1.png
http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-2.png

New:
(http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-5.png)
It is based on this poster by a French artist who's name escapes me at the moment  :P

(http://cerriousdesign.com/catalog/images/nouveau_poster_8.jpg)

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: Dorian on December 29, 2010, 10:34:35 pm

According to my vast knowledge of French artists, I can safely say that the poster is by Paul Berthon.
... Okay fine it was in the corner of the image.   :-[

Your piece is excellent so far, everything is perfect. The only problem I have is with the hand. Perhaps allow more space at the bottom to show the full hand? At the moment it is a bit awkward looking at it.

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: mozzy on December 30, 2010, 12:33:54 am

Improvement?
(http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-1.png)

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: EvilEye on December 30, 2010, 12:47:36 am

Thats a little better yes. The hair is pretty damn fluffy.

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: Mush on December 30, 2010, 01:04:25 am

Face edit:

(http://i.imgur.com/ij8z5.png)

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: mozzy on December 30, 2010, 01:22:52 am

Thanks!
(http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-2.png)


I don't want her to be too pretty. Just a bit above normal is perfect.

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: mozzy on December 30, 2010, 03:50:59 pm

Major update, shading is yucky:
(http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-4.png)

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: Mathias on December 31, 2010, 04:04:04 am

Her face is too flat. Compare against your ref.

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: mozzy on December 31, 2010, 07:14:04 am

What else do you reccomend doing because I'm not seeing much of a difference in the shading.
(http://i154.photobucket.com/albums/s268/mozzymuradyasin/OdekaTitleArt-5.png)

Title: Re: Game Title Screen Art
Post by: krasimir on December 31, 2010, 09:37:19 am

I like the color palette, other than that it's not really my type of girl :)