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Topic: Looking for some sprite critique... (Read 20957 times)
Ambient
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Re: Looking for some sprite critique...
Reply #40 on:
December 13, 2010, 10:26:38 pm
I think her legs should come in front of her loin cloth a bit in the frames where her legs are farthest from her body. As of now it doesn't really seem to be affected by her legs, it looks like it's in a pendulum swing in front of her. The loin cloth doesn't seem to follow the bends of the legs either (around her waist).
Great progress, I like watching it progress
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Blacklight_Studios
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Re: Looking for some sprite critique...
Reply #41 on:
December 19, 2010, 08:03:45 pm
Agreed. However, that's just a minor detail that won't be picked up on in a game, unless the player is looking for the flaws. I would still fix it a little, though.
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