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Offline TheSilentRoomate

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on: November 16, 2010, 03:40:21 pm
So I'm slowly but surely working on this game. I am trying to use very few colors and use flat one color for most things. I drew up this room, but it's really boring looking, does anyone have any idea how I can spice it up? Thanks!

« Last Edit: November 17, 2010, 01:49:55 am by TheSilentRoomate »

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Re: Indoors

Reply #1 on: November 16, 2010, 05:35:03 pm
Well, it seems kind of obvious to me, but the word 'spice' should tell you what's wrong here.  The reason that Europeans went looking for spice was that their food was bland (or so they told me in school); using a single flat color is going to make things bland.  You want to keep things minimal, and that's cool and I respect your artistic license, but it's totally possible to cross the line from minimal to indecipherable-- like the problem of drawing a polar bear in a blizzard.  Ultimately, you're either going to have to use a little more color or add a little more detail in some way in order to make it clear that I'm looking at a bed and not a well, for instance.

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Re: Indoors

Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 07:10:29 pm
Maybe try using a similar perspective inside to the one you're using on the outside view of the building, so two sides of things are visible, rather than only one.

For example:

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Re: Indoors

Reply #3 on: November 16, 2010, 07:44:04 pm
oh wow that looks way better! Thanks a bunch I'll whip up another one based on that when i get home!

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Re: Indoors

Reply #4 on: November 16, 2010, 07:53:54 pm
Ya know...I'm not sure if the perspective is it. It certainly helps though. Here are a few things I think might help:
  • The color scheme. It kinda makes the room look...dead. Try using some more brighter colors.
  • The room is empty. The only things in it is the clothes rack, and the bed. Put some new things in there. If you're at a lose for ideas, think of the things you have in your room.

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Re: Indoors

Reply #5 on: November 17, 2010, 01:49:25 am
Alright! here's my attempt! what does everyone think?

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Re: Indoors

Reply #6 on: November 17, 2010, 01:59:24 am
That's pretty nice, though, you sorta got the colors mixed up for the two walls.
Makes for a wonky perspective.
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Re: Indoors

Reply #7 on: November 17, 2010, 02:19:43 am
Oh shit I did! Ugh now everything looks weird if i don't go with it

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Re: Indoors

Reply #8 on: November 17, 2010, 07:23:17 pm
Hey, love your style!
Just wanted to show you this edit:

I'm not really sure about the window, but I just thought with this perspective the left part should be hidden a little.
'Hope this helps!

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Re: Indoors

Reply #9 on: November 17, 2010, 08:28:31 pm
MUUUUCH better. Thats what I call a bedroom :D