DMW2 slime, re-made

[Dokozai]

well first off, for those of you who don't know, DMW is for dragon warrior monsters........
second off this is a slime:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Rockett.jpg#file
(cute,isn't he? )

here is my version:   

[Rydin]

Based on the thousands of slimes I've killed ( ), I would say the first thing you should do is get rid of the dithering--slimes are smooth, and in the piece, the dithering makes it look fuzzy and textured.
Next, I think the translucency could use some work--you can usually see through a slime--although I guess there are occasions where they are more of a matte gel...
And, lastly, if it where mine, I'd lose the black outline...but that's just me; stay with it if you like it man.

Good luck with this.  Oh, and I have to ask; are you just redoing just this sprite or are you going to overhaul the whole game? because that'd be very interested to see. 

[Dokozai]

Based on the thousands of slimes I've killed ( ), I would say the first thing you should do is get rid of the dithering--slimes are smooth, and in the piece, the dithering makes it look fuzzy and textured.
Next, I think the translucency could use some work--you can usually see through a slime--although I guess there are occasions where they are more of a matte gel...
And, lastly, if it where mine, I'd lose the black outline...but that's just me; stay with it if you like it man.

Good luck with this.  Oh, and I have to ask; are you just redoing just this sprite or are you going to overhaul the whole game? because that'd be very interested to see. 

well I will most likely do alot more monsters, and yeah I will fix the dithering,thanks for replying,and critisizing