Pixelation
Critique => Pixel Art => Topic started by: Dokozai on September 22, 2007, 05:15:15 pm
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well first off, for those of you who don't know, DMW is for dragon warrior monsters........
second off this is a slime:http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Rockett.jpg#file
(cute,isn't he? ;D)
here is my version: (http://img250.imageshack.us/img250/6940/remadedmw2slimefc1.png)
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Based on the thousands of slimes I've killed ( :lol:), I would say the first thing you should do is get rid of the dithering--slimes are smooth, and in the piece, the dithering makes it look fuzzy and textured.
Next, I think the translucency could use some work--you can usually see through a slime--although I guess there are occasions where they are more of a matte gel...
And, lastly, if it where mine, I'd lose the black outline...but that's just me; stay with it if you like it man.
Good luck with this. Oh, and I have to ask; are you just redoing just this sprite or are you going to overhaul the whole game? because that'd be very interested to see. :) :y:
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Based on the thousands of slimes I've killed ( :lol:), I would say the first thing you should do is get rid of the dithering--slimes are smooth, and in the piece, the dithering makes it look fuzzy and textured.
Next, I think the translucency could use some work--you can usually see through a slime--although I guess there are occasions where they are more of a matte gel...
And, lastly, if it where mine, I'd lose the black outline...but that's just me; stay with it if you like it man.
Good luck with this. Oh, and I have to ask; are you just redoing just this sprite or are you going to overhaul the whole game? because that'd be very interested to see. :) :y:
well I will most likely do alot more monsters, and yeah I will fix the dithering,thanks for replying,and critisizing ;D