[WIP] F*cking paranoia

[pixelarg]

plz xD help my x):

i acept any edit xD, yes, the sun no have AA and looks flat (like as the cubes in the image) i no have more ideas xD

time spent: one night (8 hours)

[Porque]

I love the pallette you have used same as the texture on the bridge (i think it's a bridge, or castlewall or.. ) anyway. i do think that the shading isn't right on the bridge. since you have mirrored it. if you look at the shading of it it looks like the sun must be in the exact middle, and it isn't. I don't know if this was on purpose.
I do think the sun has a very original design, please finish !:P

[Jeremy]

Love it

The mirroring's a little annoying, small variations could work wonders imo. You're probably going to change it but having the edge highlight hug the dark colour is a no-no

I too love the palette

[pixelarg]

Aww! thanks guys!

yes, the mirror is bad, and

"i do think that the shading isn't right on the bridge. since you have mirrored it. if you look at the shading of it it looks like the sun must be in the exact middle, and it isn't. I don't know if this was on purpose."

Yes is purpose, the sun does not affect the shading ^^

what I want is to give me ideas for improving the sun and the cubes ^^

I appreciate any edit (much xD) or any idea ^^