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Offline Dazurus Milestone

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Raidou

on: May 17, 2008, 10:45:05 pm
He is a character I created today(60% custom, I edited from another sprite I made which was 100% custom) C&C appreciated ^^

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Re: Raidou

Reply #1 on: May 17, 2008, 11:02:53 pm
Shading seems a bit odd to me, as if there's a light source coming from 2 directions.



Ya shouldn't do that, because the lights contradict each other and makes it look weird.

Line art is pretty well done, good job there.

Finally, some more contrast wouldn't hurt either, try using different colors instead of different shades of a single color.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2008, 11:29:17 pm by brod »

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Re: Raidou

Reply #2 on: May 17, 2008, 11:46:20 pm
what are his knives made of?  right now, they just look like red.  try to add some real description with your pixels - on the weapons and elsewhere - rather than just color and general form.  you'll be surprised what you can get out of a little spot of light or dark, or a different hue.

for instance, check out the sabre in my avatar.  it's smaller than your guy's knives, but you can tell that it's a warm, maybe brassy metal, curved, and has a basket hilt.  it's all about controlling your variables - color and value and placement - to get the desired effect.
« Last Edit: May 17, 2008, 11:51:10 pm by ndchristie »
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Re: Raidou

Reply #3 on: May 18, 2008, 01:13:42 am
I'm a noob spriter thanks I never knew about that stuff ^^. My bro signed here yesterday and hes better spriter so I decided to join to.

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Raidou update ^^

Reply #4 on: May 24, 2008, 01:21:25 am
Yeah I updated my last sprite and I think this one is waaay better. ^^ C&C appreciated

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My new update

Reply #5 on: May 30, 2008, 08:04:32 pm
Here is my new update. I shaded more of the face and gave hin EYEZ! WHOWEEEEEEE! ^^

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Re: My new update

Reply #6 on: May 30, 2008, 08:26:08 pm
Images doesn't need to be huge and baby blue.
Quite hard to see the image very well.