Demons [nudity and gore]

[Arachne]

OK, how about this. I added some more tooth-like protrusions and changed the shape of the hole a bit. More oozing fluids to come.

[tocky]

Interestingly, now she has a seam that runs from her neck down to her gut. Maybe her whole chest opens up like a mouth?

the ribteeth look kind of goofy and comical, not so scary. (although less so that before when it had the beaker thing going) I would suggest that they should mimic the teeth on the tentacle/head bit, in as much as you can do that with ribs.

[Arachne]

Ooh... OK



Better now?

Edit: Adjusted the palette a teeny bit.

[robotacon]

Now it's so damn creepy!
Now the belly is the focus of the picture and then you look up past the breasts and finally see the horror that once was her head.

Dr Freud would prolly have one or two comments about this image though, it's quite disturbing mixing nudiy and crazy stuff like that and I love it.

I really like how it's partly dittered and partly (dare I say) "cell-shaded".

[TrevoriuS]

Now shouldn't that be featured?
Awesome and inspiring

[Faceless]

Ooh... OK



Better now?

Edit: Adjusted the palette a teeny bit.

Excellent update.
I was thinking to myself with each new version that her groin needed something extra, but I couldn't lay a finger on what. What you came up with is perfect - it is thoroughly disgusting and completely avoids being perverse or giggle worthy. You're definitely on the home stretch now; keep it up!

[Arachne]

Bleh... I feel that I've lost a lot of contrast here by blending the warm and cold colors like this. With the way I've put these palettes together, trying to separate colors will just make those parts seem grainy compared to the rest. Maybe two identical ramps (save for hue) would have worked better. I think that's what I need to do with the other demon.

What else needs fixing now?

[Zero]

Wow..that is just absolutely beautiful (or horribly grotesque, depending on how you look at it ) I have no crits, I think you should call this one finished.

I say this deserves to be featured. 

[tocky]

I think you're right about the contrast - I think maybe just get rid of the pinks on the teeth, the parts of her mouth that aren't the tongue, and the pit of her stomach, and it'll help.

maybe shift the whole pallete a bit? Like:

Added a bit of yellow, +brightness, +saturation.

Maybe you could add something to the background on the right, just above those teeth and below the tentacle, like a boil or something. It just seems like there should be more grey there, for symmetry.

These are all just slight niggles, though. It's really wonderful/horrible as is.

[Alevice]

I really think the dithering hurts this particular image - it made everyhing look grainy, it softened too much the shading, and details like the tumours and such no longer look as disgusting.