Fat dragon pixel!

[jedzed]

Ive been away for quite awhile just studying peoples pixel art and testing out styles and that lot, but yeah im in the middle of making a dragon pixel and i just want people to show me how to make it better along the way if you know what i mean so heres the outline im not sure if the poportions are right but it must of took 2-3 hours pixel by pixel trying to get it to look right, not just some quick job
so here it is

hope you like

first started:



progress so far:

[jedzed]

i fixed a bit of outline on its stomach and arms




 

[Sharm]

Is that black thing on the side of his head supposed to be his mouth?

[terminal_arcade]

I instantly assumed it was. Looks cute to me. I think it reads adequately well, but would read even better once the lower lip is shaded.

[jedzed]

its suppose to be part of his mouth, yes lol

[Opacus]

You might be able to see it's his mouth, but it's not placed on his face, but on the side of his neck.
I'd place it a little forward.

Also, what's that thing sticking out the back? The tail?

[mangust]

It's very funny )) Good!
Yes, tail is a broken sausage - more analysis and thinning on end of tail.
And with head some strange maybe something like this be more appropriate:

Good work. I am hope you colour this?

[jedzed]

hmmh the tail does look a bit weird but its how i prefer it to be and yes i am gonna colour this but tis gonna take awhile ^.^

hmm when that animation flickers back and forth it makes his head shape look weird but i guess ill keep it my way itll all make sense once its shaded ^.^

[Bonus]

I think the new lines on the ehad that mang did made it look alot better. Nice edit. And id also agree on the tail.

[jedzed]

Here it is ive partly shaded abit and ive done the outline and creds to mang for the head part lol and to elk for telling me what parts were out of place


i know theres something wrong with his chin but im trying to find away to get around it