Eh... a person

[Mark]

Ill be adding more folds and stuff to the shirt. Dunno if I'll be keeping the current face - I may go with a smoother, cartoon-ier one. Trying to make the light more dramatic, too. Anyways, how do I need to make it better?



15 colors i think?

~edit~



Not sure about the colors right now, ill check 'em on a CRT, I'm hoping the colors are vivid - thats how they look from here. Im working on the folds right now, I think I may rework the whole right arm,or atleast below the elbow.

[Filax_666]

The shirt looks nice, the foldings and shading on it worked out alright.

But that face! I don't like it maybe you should really go for that "smoother, cartoon-ier one", as you said.

[Mark]

I'm still working on the folds though, not done yet - oh, and I didn't catch what you were saying about the face? Could you rephrase that? nvrmnd i understand