Is he a wip ?
are u gonna do the second leg and hand ?
Well, if he's posting it here I'm sure he expects critique pointing out things that can be improved in the piece, so even if it isn't a WIP, you can still say something constructive. And for the second question, his name is Stumpy Stanley...
I think it'd look a lot better if you shallowed out some shadows. I'm sure his clavicle doesn't stick out as far as his pectorals, which seem to protrude as much as every rib in his chest. It's like everything takes up the same distance from his body according to their shadows, do you know what I mean? Not everything needs the deep shadows.