I think its pretty good, but would agree the shadow/light contrast could be a bit better defined, I had to look up an image of this character and after seeing I also thought that the contrast between the shell and body could be better also. Since its a question of shading I did not touch your line art or general detailing, I did not do much just a bit on contrast a a tiny bit of shading, try experiment around with various contrasts, i guess its tricky when your working at grey-scale.