Bird animation Critique.

[Beetleking22]

Hello guys. I started to animate again but I tend to make a lot of erros because Im still pretty noob when it comes animation. I would love to hear some  criticism. The animation supposed to be faster but when I saved it as Gif it turned to very slow.

[Beetleking22]

I got some help from Tig forum. It seems I had some problem with position. The the small touch  like position improves a lot.
 

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[MysteryMeat]

Oh yeah, big improvement! I'd have​ Never noticed!

[CFKaligula]

I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.

Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
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[Beetleking22]

I think there is 1 frame too much of his wings rising, it should be an inbetween instead. I tried to make this edit myself to see if it worked but wings are hard, so please forgive me.

Yeah I notice that.

No problem! Better? Or are the  last wing too low?

Other than that I think that by changing the frame rate of some frames could make the wing claps a lot more heavier. Probably doesn't fit such a small bird, but if it was a bigger bird it would definitely improve it.
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I have done that in Original version but I cannot show it because when I save it it looks slow..