I need to work on my lineart, so i tried some stuff out and this is what i got:

I don't know wich is better, although its only 1 line difference, that line could make alot of difference in the pic and in color.

Iff anyone got some C+C or tips, please do post them, i'm kinda stuck with this.
You may edit iff you like,iff you do so, explane me what you've done, and don't just post like: here, *the edit* it looks much better like this.
I don't know what to do on his chest. Heck i don't even know what color fits him.
p.s: does some1 have an tutorial about hue shifting to purple, i really like it when other ppl shade stuff to purple.
I can do it a lil, but not that much

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