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Unofficial main character[WIP]

on: August 19, 2010, 10:36:45 am
Well the rpg game is officially on standby for now  >:( but I have been writing down some ideas for a game and I like where it's headin  :D    Unofficial main character -->

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #1 on: August 19, 2010, 09:31:12 pm
The back leg seems shorter then the front one, and it looks to be bent in an odd way.

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #2 on: August 21, 2010, 03:15:42 am
Thanks kid , I fixed up that leg i think. gave him boots .

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #3 on: August 21, 2010, 06:32:10 am
Ok, anatomy rundown and other things...

His legs are very short compared to his arms and the rest of his body.
His cape has a very thick outline to it, and the pink line doesn't match with the rest.
His ear is very very large.
His head is a bit too far back, like he's about to get blown back. His head is also very squat and his right eye is popping out of his head.
Buckles on the middle belt should be placed a little higher.
Weird use of AA on his arm and chest. Try the Capcom method of lightening the line colors first.

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #4 on: August 21, 2010, 07:08:31 am
Thank you very much Ixis for taking the time to help me improve  :)  Ill post up a new edit soon.
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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #5 on: August 21, 2010, 09:37:06 am
Bloop   ::)

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #6 on: August 21, 2010, 09:38:24 pm

This is my idea ...
If you like I tell it to me three options.
Nayn Hope you like:) Nayn
Not having description is a description (?)

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #7 on: August 24, 2010, 03:28:59 am
 :y: I do think the sheild would look cool , but hes not a shield kinda guy.
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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #8 on: August 24, 2010, 10:50:24 pm
here I did you an edit on stance mostly right now, your  character looks off balance, like he would easily fall over. You should use less shades and maybe get rid of those brown straps. I think they make the piece too busy.

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Re: Unofficial main character[WIP]

Reply #9 on: September 01, 2010, 02:27:02 am
Sorry i haven't checked here in a bit (first year of college  :ouch:) But i love that stance. Ill try it tomorrow! Thanks for the crits guys.   I did work on it a bit though.

Uploaded with ImageShack.us made him a it taller and added a green glare to him. But Im going to try that stance and see how it looks :]. *Also everyone seems to see the cape behind him like a superman cape for some reason. I was trying to make it like Eizo's shoulder cape but im not sure which one would look better. any ideas?
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