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Offline Flame

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New Here. :x

on: March 20, 2006, 02:18:56 am
Tend to make kind of small sprites :x

Just a warrior made today.


Small Master Chief


Something a little larger DOA Lei-Fang

Thanks to faceless and takam for crits

Thats about it  :-X
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Re: New Here. :x

Reply #1 on: March 20, 2006, 03:15:25 am
The warriors eyes are a bit hard to pick out, when not zoomed in. Could just be me, though.
The master chief one is nice, good usage of color. Something feels a bit odd about the arms though.
As for the last one, it's good, but what's up with the feet? Looks like she's wearing transparent high heels or something. ???

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Re: New Here. :x

Reply #2 on: March 20, 2006, 04:27:45 am
Nice usage of such small space.
Wait... that's with an exclamation mark. !

Besides that, I'm sure Faceless and TakaM gave you excellent crits, because there is almost nothing bad in the pieces besides what is mentioned by ViZen.

Lei-Fang is sexy, and I get the feeling she's winking at me. Staring at her large glutinous maximus, however, convinced me that the folds in her... uh... dress shouldn't keep repeating themselves in the exact same manner. Rather, as you get closer to the ground, the folds should relax more and generally altogether dissipate into an unwrinkled piece of.... cloth.

Anyways, welcome, Flame.

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Re: New Here. :x

Reply #3 on: March 20, 2006, 02:52:07 pm
Thanks, Id like to work on it more, but I still have school :x
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