This is like the 5th jpg you've posted(after several other people mentioning it). A JPG is useless on this board. People will not do a serious critique on a jpg. It's impossible to tell what was hand pixelled on a jpg because of the bleed and artifacts. Pixel art just looks ugly inside of a jpg.
And like Gil was saying about hte multiple posts. There's a limited amount of space on the first page of the board. If you've already got one thread on the firstpage then make a new post on that thread instead of starting a new one.
And tbh, if the clarity was working properly, I think the pixel and vector art would clash violently. The vector side has a different shading stylization on bigger things. Proportionally the two sides are different. The vector is inevitably going to make your side look more primitive because it's going to be smoothly shaded and AAed
