Can someone give me a little touch to get this better?

[silverpurple]

feel free to change it
 

[WM]

I'd rather give you suggestions and let you do the editing 

First of all, you need to tweak the palette; you have a lot of whit there that is overly-vibrant. MAybe:

1. Work some greys in there to give it some shape, which in tun makes it a little more understandable to the eyes (at least more understandable than a solid white shape burning a hole through the plane)

or

2. Adjusting your white to be either a slightly-grayed white or an off-white, both of which would be much easier on the eyes.


Also make sure to center your text -- right now it seems squished.

Along with shadows make sure to try and use highlights.

**Designate a light source, and make it apparent to the viewer!

And dont be afraid to work with colors that are desaturated; it helps add to realism.

[silverpurple]

waw thanks for the advise,,i will try fix it..hehe
im still newbie and still learning more..because in my country very few people know about pixel art..hhhh
they also like vector and the others..thanks

[twodayslate]

What is your reference image? The cassettes I have seen the bottom part is not inset it is jutting out. http://justinnewitter.com/stock/Black_cassette_tape.jpg

[silverpurple]

its from my imagination actualy..ahhaha

[dpixel]

feel free to change it
 

Since you said so.  I still play cassettes sometimes.


The main thing I noticed is the proportions were off.  Both overall size and positions of things inside, such as the place where the pins go and the reels, etc.  I know there are variations of labels, so that could be anything.  I didn't change any colors or mess with the shading much, but that would go a long way depending if you wanted it to look like a diagram or something more artistic.

Anyway, I had to play with it since you said so. 

[Marcpixels]

May be with another color like this look more like a cassettes 

[silverpurple]

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cool!
thank you everyone...i like that all you change!

[Marcpixels]

^^ is just was a quick edit. u can shade it better

[Larwick]

waaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww
cool!
thank you everyone...i like that all you change!

Will you be taking their thoughts and ideas into consideration and making an edit to your piece accordingly? I only ask since I have yet to see you update a piece from all the threads that you've made - it makes it seem like you're not using this forum to improve your pieces but rather to simply showcase them. I suggest you spend some time on a single piece of work, using the people here to help you as you go along - you will learn a lot in the process.