What? ANOTHER Animation?? Jeez... [WIP]

[Crazy Asian Gamer]

Anyways, I think my avatar is gettin' yellow and smelly.

It's mostly WIP. I only finished the left guy's animation (minus lazer effex and stuff). The right guy is there to show you how I tend to animate (fill in teh blanks haha).
C&C at this early stage is always appreciated.

EDIT: Oh, and I should mention that they're not staying silhouettes, and there'll be a bg and stuff. 42 frame count so far.

[Ro83rt]

Does the guy on the right have a lightsaber? I can't wait to see the finished product. Right now though it seems pretty bland. but then again its only a WIP. Heh, listen to me, trying to sound like I'm GOOD.

[Crazy Asian Gamer]

Sorry about the delay. Was out of town.
Haha, listen to me, acting like I'm good. 
C+C up to this point?

[Larwick]

C&C? I think the left guy's legs seem a tad thick, but hey, it's only a silhouette. Hopefully this'll turn out pretty neat, but are you going to be extending on the animation or just colouring it now?

[Souly]

Should toss in some bullet action into the mix.
As well as the missile the dude shoots.

[Larwick]

Hmm yes, and when he fires the rocket i think there should be a longer pause before the other man comes in for the killing blow, otherwise it just looks like he drops the launcher.

[Crazy Asian Gamer]

Should toss in some bullet action into the mix.
As well as the missile the dude shoots.

I plan to... as soon as I stop being lazy.

Hmm yes, and when he fires the rocket i think there should be a longer pause before the other man comes in for the killing blow, otherwise it just looks like he drops the launcher.

Good point.

I need to stop being so slow.