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Offline Perihelion

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Necromancer [WIP]

on: December 23, 2009, 05:14:34 pm
Anatomy is a huge weak point of mine, so I figured I'd post this for critique before I get farther and work some fundamental mistake into the piece.


Obviously I haven't really done any cleanup yet except a bit on the armor.

The figure:


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Re: Necromancer [WIP]

Reply #1 on: December 23, 2009, 07:16:24 pm
Right now I think you should work on the pose and the proportions. I think the far leg is looking a little gimpy. The perspective on it is a bit confusing, and the pose is a bit "flyswatted." This is an excellent page with a ton of helpful tips. I've linked it to the section that mentions flyswatting with a little sketch. Very useful! I like the idea behind this piece, hope you get it finished!