harmonious world

[Jeremy]

If the hood and hair are blowing, should the rest of the hoodie not also 

(Just to, y'know, make more work)

[Tuna Unleashed]

you sicken me 

[WM]

  He makes a good point though!

[Tuna Unleashed]

and that's what hurts the most

[Dex]

Arachne's edit on the pants is very nice; not only is the stance a bit better, but the jaggies you have at the moment are mainly taken care of.

Look at her edit and see what you can improve upon- take time to smooth things out and like Arachne said: polish! You're doing good so far, though.

I personally would be distracted by the constant wind-flow in-game. It just seems to spastic for my taste, but it's your prerogative.

[Tuna Unleashed]

more cleaning and a small stance change

[Tuna Unleashed]

[Photocopier]

It would be funnier if he used his other hand to brush his hair to the left, then it just blows over again, as if he can't stop it.

[CrazyMLC]

Okay, probably my last edit.
I made the part of the jeans around the ankles wider and bigger, on your versions they look like strechy pants! (AKA not like jeans.)
I used orange for the hoodie, because you can use those colors for the face and hair, etc. (The colors are multi-purpose.)
I made the legs closer together, and I changed the feet. (To give a more comfortable stance.)
I added in white cuffs on the hoodie so its easier to make out the hands.
I made the shoes brown to give it more balance.
I gave him a face!


Truth about why I've been giving so many edits: I really like the image, the design, etc.
I hope you keep going with this!

[Tuna Unleashed]

okay, i do appreciate all these edits, but you're kind of completely changing it to be more like your style. anyway,

Okay, probably my last edit.
I made the part of the jeans around the ankles wider and bigger, on your versions they look like strechy pants! (AKA not like jeans.)
skinny jeans bro
I used orange for the hoodie, because you can use those colors for the face and hair, etc. (The colors are multi-purpose.)
faces aren't orange
I made the legs closer together, and I changed the feet. (To give a more comfortable stance.)
I added in white cuffs on the hoodie so its easier to make out the hands.
I made the shoes brown to give it more balance.
I gave him a face!
mine has a face

Truth about why I've been giving so many edits: I really like the image, the design, etc.
I hope you keep going with this!