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Re: harmonious world

Reply #50 on: December 03, 2009, 01:23:49 am
If the hood and hair are blowing, should the rest of the hoodie not also  ???

(Just to, y'know, make more work)

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #51 on: December 03, 2009, 01:42:56 am
you sicken me  :durr:

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #52 on: December 03, 2009, 01:49:49 am
 :lol: He makes a good point though!

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #53 on: December 03, 2009, 02:24:06 am
and that's what hurts the most

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #54 on: December 03, 2009, 03:38:49 am
Arachne's edit on the pants is very nice; not only is the stance a bit better, but the jaggies you have at the moment are mainly taken care of.

Look at her edit and see what you can improve upon- take time to smooth things out and like Arachne said: polish! You're doing good so far, though.

I personally would be distracted by the constant wind-flow in-game. It just seems to spastic for my taste, but it's your prerogative.

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #55 on: December 03, 2009, 02:36:27 pm

more cleaning and a small stance change

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #56 on: December 04, 2009, 05:19:52 pm

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #57 on: December 04, 2009, 08:13:50 pm
It would be funnier if he used his other hand to brush his hair to the left, then it just blows over again, as if he can't stop it.

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #58 on: December 04, 2009, 11:20:27 pm

Okay, probably my last edit.
I made the part of the jeans around the ankles wider and bigger, on your versions they look like strechy pants! :D (AKA not like jeans.)
I used orange for the hoodie, because you can use those colors for the face and hair, etc. (The colors are multi-purpose.)
I made the legs closer together, and I changed the feet. (To give a more comfortable stance.)
I added in white cuffs on the hoodie so its easier to make out the hands.
I made the shoes brown to give it more balance.
I gave him a face!


Truth about why I've been giving so many edits: I really like the image, the design, etc.
I hope you keep going with this!
« Last Edit: December 04, 2009, 11:33:29 pm by CrazyMLC »

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Re: harmonious world

Reply #59 on: December 04, 2009, 11:33:32 pm
okay, i do appreciate all these edits, but you're kind of completely changing it to be more like your style. anyway,

Okay, probably my last edit.
I made the part of the jeans around the ankles wider and bigger, on your versions they look like strechy pants! :D (AKA not like jeans.)
skinny jeans bro
I used orange for the hoodie, because you can use those colors for the face and hair, etc. (The colors are multi-purpose.)
faces aren't orange
I made the legs closer together, and I changed the feet. (To give a more comfortable stance.)
I added in white cuffs on the hoodie so its easier to make out the hands.
I made the shoes brown to give it more balance.
I gave him a face!
mine has a face

Truth about why I've been giving so many edits: I really like the image, the design, etc.
I hope you keep going with this!