and stop following tuts, because you will get the result of whats in the tut, and that tuts result is very crappy.
Indeed. You should really get tutorials out of your mindset. You need to find
art books and materials, because they focus on art fundamentals. If you have no grasp of art fundamentals, you're dead in your tracks.
The grass doesn't really come across as grass. Looks more like a thick carpet of fallen leaves. Or ivy on a wall. Try looking at a field and see what the grass looks like. It's large sections of colour, basically. You get close and its blades that grow in patches and tufts. It depends what scale you want to do it at, but you'll be somewhere between those 2, I imagine.
So far im just doing as evreone is telling me to do .
Isn't it just better telling me what to fix now here and there.
Maybe you're doing what you
think other people mean in terms of what you understand about artistic process (which appears to be minimal; you even have "novice" in the title of the thread!). If you say you're listening, then you must be misinterpreting what we're suggesting. Just about everyone that has posted here seems to be in agreement with each other. There's a consensus on the critique, so trying to tell us how to critique isn't the solution (not to mention this isn't our first rodeo with critique, so to speak). If you can't understand our critique, and you're genuinely listening, then it's clear that you need an expansion of knowledge to proceed.
