[WIP] Face Melt

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First, some uber quick history. I used to be a part of pixelation back in the day before you guys moved the website. I was an avid member, albeit young (think i was only 15 or 16, 21 now) and extremely inexperienced... So I am still extremely inexperienced... but a little older now Anyways, I am in college and for a final project I have to create a video game so I figured "Hey, why not make pixel art for it?!" So I remembered you guys and binged ya up and here I am... On with the piece.

This piece literally started as one line... I wasn't sure where I was going or where I am going to end up. At this point it is almost nothing but linework with some pretty colors thrown in. The only thing that I was sure about (only after I started mind you) is that I want the face to have slight bulk to it, and leaning slightly to the right.

Anyways... C+C, edits, etc... anything to help me out and get my pixelly juices flowing.

Thanks guys... and it's good to be back.



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Okie Dokie then.... Started becoming a little more decisive with what I am trying to achieve... Cleaned up some of the linework... then added more sloppy linework Hopefully you guys can see kinda what I am going for though. I know the squished eye's iris is more detailed than the other one but I plan on fixing that pretty soon.



By the way, this is all extremely rough (obviously XD) and I hope to have it looking much better once I have figured out exactly what I am trying to accomplish. Comments and Critiques are mucho appreciated... if your looking at it you may as well tell me what I can do to make it better or flame it, tell me it sucks whatever

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Update, yet again Not quite tired with this one just yet even though I have been fiddling with nothing but the damn linework for 2 hours

Here Yee GO!

[EyeCraft]

Hello, and welcome (back)!

Creepy piece . It's huge, though, you're creating a tonne of unnecessary work. You could shrink this down to something like 64x64 - 128x128. What kind of game is it for?

When laying out initial colours for roughing in the piece, try selecting say 4 values to cover the range from shadow to light, instead of multiple hues of a similar value range. This way you can block in the form, instead of just colouring shapes.

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Yeah.... its not really for a game... just kinda a warmup

Good advice though... think I am gonna give up on it and just move onto sprites for my game.... hopefully with a few months of fine tuning i will be able to come up with something. Thanks for the advice man