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WIP Anime Horror Game

on: August 31, 2009, 10:26:27 pm

We are currently working on a anime horror game with were wolfs vampires and demons we have quite a bit done but we want your views on our work so far

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Re: WIP Anime Horror Game

Reply #1 on: September 01, 2009, 04:23:40 am
Torso on the vampire is too long, legs should be longer, I say.

Both are a bit pillow-shady. Where's the light source?

There's a lot of jaggedness throughout both, eg the werewolf's head/face, vamp's pants. You have strong shadow cutting into highlight.

The werewolf's arm on our left has some problems around the wrist. What's happening there? It looks way too thin.

Here's a bit of an edit I did on the vamp. I noticed your palette has a number of very similar colours that could be merged, 3 of which are near-blacks.