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Re: [Wip] Skull monster C+C

Reply #10 on: August 31, 2009, 11:41:52 pm
Lots of dither-banding going on, you need to get rid of that, it really sticks out.

Also, restudy the volumes on the paintover, yours is still a little pillow shaded.
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Re: [Wip] Skull monster C+C

Reply #11 on: September 02, 2009, 11:34:56 pm
Here we are.

I did as you suggested, though I can't say I prefer it to my previous edit. Perhaps I did it wrong?
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Re: [Wip] Skull monster C+C

Reply #12 on: September 04, 2009, 09:44:56 am
It looks a bit flat on the right, the back of your figure. Maybe get that darker shade in around the back edge a bit more. If you wanted to keep the backlit part then maybe go into your darker shade and use the midtone as the backlight?
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