« previous next »
Pages: [1]

AuthorTopic: Some sort of sword  (Read 3122 times)

Offline arrrgh

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 2
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Some sort of sword

on: August 09, 2009, 05:30:15 am

Getting started with pixel art, this is my third real attempt. Any help or criticism would be appreciated!
Logged

Offline HughSpectrum

  • 0010
  • *
  • Posts: 283
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Some sort of sword

Reply #1 on: August 09, 2009, 06:35:39 am
Most obvious thing is that the butt end of the sword is way too large.  Make it more proportionate with the rest of the hilt and it'll be a huge improvement.  It's actually not bad for a third attempt ever.
Logged

Offline arrrgh

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 2
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Some sort of sword

Reply #2 on: August 09, 2009, 07:19:29 am

I lengthened the hilt and made the end a little smaller, I think it looks better now.
Logged

Offline samw3

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 51
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Some sort of sword

Reply #3 on: August 10, 2009, 02:35:47 am
The handle looks as flat as the blade.
Logged
Sam Washburn

Offline Dyble

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 67
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Some sort of sword

Reply #4 on: August 11, 2009, 07:29:26 am
Give darker shading near the edges of the hilt to make it "round"
Logged

Offline gandhi420

  • 0001
  • *
  • Posts: 6
  • Karma: +0/-0
    • View Profile

Re: Some sort of sword

Reply #5 on: August 11, 2009, 08:59:59 am
here's an edit showing how to make the hilt look round. i kinda got carried away making the edit and also reduced the color count a little.
Logged
Pages: [1]
« previous next »