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Offline Dyble

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[WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

on: August 07, 2009, 09:02:48 pm
your probly thinking "ok.. what the hell is a zlerk" well its a creature I made up, There these Squishy ball shaped things. As babys they have wings that can move them a few feet at a time, There squishy intil they become older then they start to harden eventually there wings fall off when they get too big to fly, then they grow in size a bit, Then after some time they get the Lump on there head that turns into a huge metal spike this is when they get there first job as a guard of the colony, Then they grow fangs. Thats all i have so far
so here it is
I know they are not the greatest or even good at all  :( but go easy on me  :P

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #1 on: August 07, 2009, 09:09:18 pm
Cool creature! I think when people make up their own stuff and turn it into pixel art, that's awesome.

As far as the art goes:
The only mistake I see is the outline. Either put in some AA, or get rid of it all together.
Good luck, and I hope this goes far! :y:
« Last Edit: August 08, 2009, 03:56:58 pm by D~Dawg »

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #2 on: August 07, 2009, 09:27:32 pm
Thanks! I think I fixed the outlines a bit... tell me what you think

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #3 on: August 07, 2009, 09:31:01 pm
Either put in some AA, or get rid of it all together.
Or do both.

The main problem I see other than the outline is the lack of light shading. You have the colors of the creature, but there needs to be some light source shining light on your creature. Right now the image seems as if there is equal lighting coming from all around the creature.

EDIT: Ninja'd. The outlines are better, but the bottom lines are using green, when they should be using a darker white, like their interiors. Otherwise, much better.

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #4 on: August 07, 2009, 09:37:13 pm
Here's what it would look like without outlines.

If you don't like that, you could just AA it.

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #5 on: August 07, 2009, 09:45:09 pm

Added light source and changed outlines

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #6 on: August 07, 2009, 09:48:20 pm

Added light source and changed outlines

Ah, much better. However, you need more than highlights for light. You need shadows, and it should be brighter near the highlights. The outlines are fully developed IMHO though. This has already improved quite a bit   ;D.

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #7 on: August 07, 2009, 09:51:31 pm
Thanks! I will get to work on the lighting and shadows right now

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #8 on: August 07, 2009, 10:30:01 pm
I did a edit check it out,



Notice how the light Is hitting the Zlerk from the top right,

"But most of the time when your drawing sprites you would want the
light to come from right above the sprites head"

The light in your picture looks like it's coming from below the Zlerk
because the bottom of it is lighter then the top if it.

One way to make shading less confusing is to shade any basic shapes first.
So you would draw a sphere at the size you want the Zlerk to be then
shade it before you put it's horn or face on.

Here is a well shaded sphere.
http://www.pixeljoint.com/pixelart/34555.htm
well it's sorta a sphere.

After your Zlerk's body looks round, add the other
body parts.
If you keep the first Zlerk body you could just make it a little bigger
to make the bodies for the other Zlerk life stages.

When your choosing colors you want to have high contrast,

"contrast is when it's easy to tell the colors apart."

And also make sure that the contrast is about even going
up your color ramp.
So each color is easy to see on the previous color.

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Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)

Reply #9 on: August 07, 2009, 10:42:45 pm
Wow your edit is amazing :o I hope I get to be that good one day Thanks for all the tips Im going to do try and improve it to be almost as good as yours Thanks ;D


EDIT: it took some time but here it is
It looks more alive and way better not as good as your looked for some reason... Im sure I did something wrong
Thanks For all the help guys
« Last Edit: August 07, 2009, 11:34:36 pm by Dyble »