Why is it, that when you ask for critique, and you actually GET IT, you back off with the same excuses, that it's "supposed to be cartoony", or " And, This is just a dumb little peice, that I hope me and you can forget about "? That last quote completely counteracts the point of asking for critique in the first place! I've been monitoring your posts over a while at the pixel joint forums, and have opted not to give advice, for this exact same reason. My only hope is that if you truly like to pixel, (or like art in general) then you will learn to take critique to heart, and stop using style as a defense against great suggestions....
End rant/