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(WIP) Computer Monitor

on: July 09, 2009, 03:36:55 pm

We've done some work with this at another Pixeling website. Everyone said it wasn't too good.  :lol:
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Re: (WIP) Computer Monitor

Reply #1 on: July 10, 2009, 01:07:40 am
What are you trying to do with this, what's the intent? It's just random. The background decreases it's readibility. The high saturation blue and green are very ugly together like that. The type is sloppy and uninspired. Not very positive, but there ya go.

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Re: (WIP) Computer Monitor

Reply #2 on: July 10, 2009, 01:10:13 am
Thanks...I'll give this up and start working on something else...Any ides what that good be?  :-\
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Re: (WIP) Computer Monitor

Reply #3 on: July 10, 2009, 01:11:33 am
If you provide a reference you're working with so folk have a better idea what you're aiming for, perhaps better input will come along. So far it looks like an icon of sorts. The P is partly below the line the font is on and the spacing between the letters is inconsistent, which is perhaps why it looks 'sloppy'.

I would suggest whatever you work with next, grab a reference. A picture, a photo, a drawing - and see what happens. :)
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Re: (WIP) Computer Monitor

Reply #4 on: July 10, 2009, 01:22:59 am
Thanks once again ;D. And, Sooner or later (probably sooner) I'm gonna make an idea thread...You should drop by.
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Reply #5 on: July 10, 2009, 03:14:57 am
Thanks...I'll give this up and start working on something else...Any ides what that good be?  :-\

I look forward to your next submission. I wonder what it'll be . . .

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Re: (WIP) Computer Monitor

Reply #6 on: July 10, 2009, 03:51:56 pm
Well, like I said, drop by the Idea thread in general discussion. Help me and some other people out.
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