AuthorTopic: System Over Load !!Update!! (Read 3088 times)

SystemOverLoad · **on:** July 04, 2009, 12:18:02 am

Hello this is the 1st stance for my on-line side scroller it may not be much but I haven't had much exp with side scrollers this is like my 1st try id really like some c&c so i could learn from my mistakes and fix the base as for the head i wanted to fix the box 1st. thanks for your time every one don't mind my grammar sadly its not great but its understandable at least i think it is....

ndchristie · **Reply #1 on:** July 04, 2009, 12:30:31 am

the frame is ok, but there's a few things. the muscles seem drawn on for some reason. the knees are just like folds. there's no hips. the right his left thigh is bulging strangely. suggest hopping over to the anatomy thead for some review.

SystemOverLoad · **Reply #2 on:** July 04, 2009, 12:46:21 am

All right thanks^_^

SystemOverLoad · **Reply #3 on:** July 05, 2009, 03:23:28 pm

Iv fixed a few things any more c&c people

vinegarstroke · **Reply #4 on:** July 05, 2009, 05:02:49 pm

I think for a body so skinny, there shouldn't be so much definition in the abs or chest. Maybe some strategic shading would work better. his right leg looks a lot better now though

SystemOverLoad · **Reply #5 on:** July 05, 2009, 08:06:09 pm

Thanks for the c&c every body

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