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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #10 on: February 21, 2006, 05:07:49 pm
Update with 2 new pics... See 1st post.

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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #11 on: February 21, 2006, 07:58:46 pm
Ooh, nice! I am an absolute *sucker* for cityscapes. Espesh if it's at night and there's some kind of neon convention in town. :)
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #12 on: February 21, 2006, 08:32:10 pm
Wow  :o

I like your style, vive colors, simply forms, but in overall is all very nice :)

I have only a critique.

In the last image, when is the night the shadow of the spaceships "black" is correct, but when is in a fog i thin should be "grey".

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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #13 on: February 21, 2006, 09:23:20 pm
Ooh, nice! I am an absolute *sucker* for cityscapes. Espesh if it's at night and there's some kind of neon convention in town. :)

Updated with more neon!!!
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #14 on: February 21, 2006, 09:53:58 pm
Looking nice :) The I hiragana on oshitekudasai is cut off at the end *tsktsk* :D
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #15 on: February 22, 2006, 05:00:59 pm
yeah it kinda looks like a squashed "shi" because it's missing the right hand bit: い

in fact I'd as far say that the whole line is outta whack with the rest of the screen. in these old 80's coin ops they would sometimes leave the kanji (raiden for example) but never the instructions. Japanese games from that time rarely have instructions, and oshiateru is not something you'd often see.

インサートコイン works. There's a huge ゲームセンター near me that only has 80's games (I live in downtown tokyo) , I'll have a look next time.
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #16 on: February 22, 2006, 06:17:20 pm
Needs more pink glowy neon! MORE! MOOOOORE! ;)

Ooh, imagine them screens animating on the buildings, or getting blown out by player shots. Fadoom! Crash!
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #17 on: February 22, 2006, 06:28:16 pm
I'm in LOVE with the cityscape, but its clashing too much, imo. It would be pretty difficult to be in that area.
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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #18 on: February 22, 2006, 06:59:57 pm
I'm in LOVE with the cityscape, but its clashing too much, imo. It would be pretty difficult to be in that area.

yeah, I'll need to experiment a little with the colours once it's up and running esp if things get too confusing on the eye.

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Re: Kitty Hawk (Updated)...

Reply #19 on: February 22, 2006, 09:40:33 pm
just lower the saturation of the colors in the neon signs and it should look fine