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Offline Quake

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Eleckid

on: June 04, 2009, 10:46:40 am
Normally i don't do this but i think it'll help with C+C etc..
Anyway, i've been playing a lot of pokemon diamond and i'd really like to get into some pokemon drawing. (also thanks to Tvyon, which finally inspired me)
I do think the picture is of a screenshot, but i can't really remember since i saw it about a week ago.

I'd really like C+C on how to make the thunderpunch look more like thunder, and anything else you can see i would be grateful  :y:

Colours taken from Ampharos


Colours from Elekid (pokemon platinum)
« Last Edit: June 04, 2009, 11:13:56 am by Quake »

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Re: Eleckid

Reply #1 on: June 04, 2009, 01:11:39 pm
Hey Quake!

I did a edit on the first one with colours from Ampharos:

New:  Old:

I changed the lightnings colour from yellow to blue, to give it a more electric feeling and I don't really think lightning is that dark yellow. Also, to not make it very messy I changed the whole "bolt" so it looks more "controlled", I think the old one looks a lot like a sun or just a flower. The picture got some strange outlines too, so I fixed that by just putting a dark outline on the shaded side and a bit brighter blue outline on the bolt side. I put a blue light too on the left (his right) side to not just make it look more effectfull, but to take away the flatness.

I hope you find this helpfull, tho my crappy english!  ::)
« Last Edit: June 04, 2009, 01:13:19 pm by coffee »

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Re: Eleckid

Reply #2 on: June 04, 2009, 01:30:53 pm
Thank you very much  ;D

I've done the edit from what you said..

Don't know whether the lightning is too uhm, controlled.

« Last Edit: June 04, 2009, 01:49:24 pm by Quake »

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Re: Eleckid

Reply #3 on: June 05, 2009, 01:17:12 pm
Just edited the colours and smoothed out the shading  ::)



WIP  animation


Anything else i can improve?

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Re: Eleckid

Reply #4 on: June 06, 2009, 10:41:36 am
Where'd the contrast go???

Also, you still have that angular shading I mentioned before. Makes his body look pointy.