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Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Kuros Pixel Place Updated need more crits

on: March 30, 2009, 10:24:56 pm
I was going for this kinda bone format http://www.myfavoritegames.com/detail.aspx?i=Gohan/GohanOozaru.jpg
the hair was vegatas gaint ape form well its based off it



id like some c&c please and thank you i apologise for my grammar


Update


UPDATE NEW!!


Heres some other work im working on
« Last Edit: April 02, 2009, 11:35:30 pm by KuroRyuzaki »

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Re: Gaint Ape

Reply #1 on: March 31, 2009, 03:35:09 pm
He kind of looks like a character from the first episode of My Little Pony---


:'(

I wish I didn't know that.

That being said, he doesn't look terribly ape-like. If you're using the DBZ character as your reference, you might want to cover more of the forehead.
« Last Edit: March 31, 2009, 03:37:33 pm by Rawsushi »

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Re: Gaint Ape

Reply #2 on: March 31, 2009, 04:06:00 pm
Okay, alter, this isn't a teen-rant forum, where you post 1-word replies in a critique forum.  I'm not a mod or admin, but I know neither is tolerant of useless replies.  Do not post unless you are either A) Giving critique or helping the artist, or B) questioning the validity of critique.  Basically, moving the art forward.  Please use common sense.  (And tell me if I've stated something the rules do not.)

Be sure to read the rules, ALTER.

Regarding the sprite:
The light sources are confusing, you might want to look into that.  The shoulders do not communicate the same light as the face does, and neither agrees with the chest.  Also, face is sort of unnecessarily busy, you might want to clear it up a bit.
« Last Edit: March 31, 2009, 05:13:29 pm by Shrike »

Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Re: Gaint Ape

Reply #3 on: March 31, 2009, 04:27:42 pm
My Little pony so skinny and boney =p lolz well any way it looks nothingz like your freaky pony beast D:

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Re: Gaint Ape

Reply #4 on: March 31, 2009, 04:31:56 pm
i didnt work on the chest it was ruff took a few secounds but i didnt work on the chest i just mirrored it

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Re: Gaint Ape

Reply #5 on: March 31, 2009, 04:33:06 pm
kuro, you have like 5 active threads atm on this first page do you not find that atall confusing? I'd really consider combining it to a pixel dump or something for yours and our benefit, kinda reluctant to give any critique as it looks like you may just move onto a new project as soon as you lose interest. Not that I think you've stopped working on those other pieces I think it's great you have such an interest in pixel art, I just think it'd help you more to combine the threads so critique could be put to better use.

Just an idea, sure someone else has mentioned this but thought its worth saying.
I've not got anything interesting to type here..

Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Re: Kuros Pixel Place

Reply #6 on: March 31, 2009, 08:10:10 pm
Alright il keep all my work in one place
Update:
as for moveing on to new projects i needed to start this one for my game D:
« Last Edit: March 31, 2009, 08:27:16 pm by KuroRyuzaki »

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Re: Kuros Pixel Place

Reply #7 on: March 31, 2009, 08:28:19 pm
What's with all the horizontal lines in his stomach?

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Re: Kuros Pixel Place

Reply #8 on: March 31, 2009, 09:00:39 pm
He kind of looks like a character from the first episode of My Little Pony---


:'(

I wish I didn't know that.

That being said, he doesn't look terribly ape-like. If you're using the DBZ character as your reference, you might want to cover more of the forehead.

Actually he looks like this guy from dragonball http://fc37.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/188/e/b/Super_Saiyan_Vs__Great_Ape_by_Seijimei.jpg

How much My little pony do you watch?!  :P

Edit:
Oops, didn't realise Kuro already linked to a pic..

Offline KuroRyuzaki

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Re: Kuros Pixel Place

Reply #9 on: March 31, 2009, 09:13:00 pm
could some one actually give me C&C?